A Kanto Story

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Prologue: the night before

- the night before silver starts his journey

Silver's mom: silver honey it's 11oClock get to sleep

Silver: after this

TV announcer:(ON TV)the buizel wiggle, OUT NOW, -do the wiggle, do the buizel wiggle-

MOM: silver, you start your journey tomorrow and you're watching music programmes, turn your TV off and set your alarm

Silver: sorry mom

- he sets it for 6oClock

MOM: 6oClock!

Silver: well the early bird catches the worm, or in my case the pokemon

MOM: well turn the TV off, and get some sleep

Silver: yes mother

MOM: silver!

Silver: sorry

- the conversation wakes ellie who asks what's going on

Ellie:(half asleep)what time is it

MOM: 11oClock get back to sleep

Ellie: mom, silver had his TV on why have a go at me

MOM: because you should be asleep, now get back to sleep

Ellie: yes mom

- ellie goes back to bed

MOM: now silver, get to sleep

Silver: ok then

- turns TV off and goes to sleep

MOM: are you asleep,(looks at silver) i'll take that as a yes then

Silver: (yawns) goodnight

Ellie: oi silver goodnight

- he ignores her deliberately

Ellie: SILVER! GOODNIGHT!

MOM: ellie get back to SLEEP!

Ellie: ok then

- she gets back to sleep

Author: tomorrow Silver starts for his journey, what wil he pick find out next time on A Kanto Story, Chapter 1

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It obviously is.

Chapter 11: mt. moon trek

- who's that pokemon from last time: squirtle

- last time our heroes left pewter city and silver caught a squirtle

- (mt. moon HGSS music plays)

-Voice-over: how come silver gets to catch all the pokemon, i'm gonna
put a catching ban on him

Author: HEY!!!! you can't do that mr. voice over, enjoy folks, oh and
that's another thing....................

Silver: *yawns* morning all

J and Ja: morning silver

Silver: let's go mt. moon awaits

- just before they leave

???: want to buy a pokemon, i am a magkarp salesman

Jaylen: ok....

Magikarp salesman: i'm offering $500 for it

Silver: why should we buy it?

Magikarp salesman: because it is special, please buy it i have a wife
and kids to feed

Jordan: (reluctantly) i'll buy it

- jordan buys the magikarp

Magikarp salesman: thanks bye!

- before they go inside mt. moon

Jordan: go magikarp.....

MAGIKARP: magikarp karp (hi i'm a shiny magikarp)

S and Ja: wow a shiny magikarp, good going jordan

Jordan: great, let's go in

- they go inside mt. moon

Silver: whoa!! it's so big in here, and it's such a big cave, we'll
easily get lost

Jordan: silver, where's your sense of adventure dude

Silver: didn't you say that in viridian forest

Jordan: maybe.....

- they walk ahead, unfortunately they didn't notice the stalactites
and then.........

S, J and Ja: OWWWWWW!!!

Silver: who left that there....

Jordan: team rocket.....?

Jaylen: nah, it's naturally occuring oh look........

- then a clefairy comes up to our heroes..

Silver: isn't that a clefairy

Jordan: go magikarp use bounce

MAGIKARP: magikarp karp (sorry no can do)

- the clefairy then waggles it's fingers, it was using metronome, the
metronome turned out a dud at first but then a big bolt of thunder came
down, magikarp fainted

Jordan: go ivysaur, and use vine whip

Jaylen: i want that clefairy, go hitmonchan use focus punch

- the clefairy uses metronome again, which turns out to be psybeam,
hitmonchan lost it's focus and couldn't move, the vine whip hits the
target clefairy fainted

Jordan: go pokeball (clefairy is caught) yay i got clefairy, now go
clefairy

- then a stalactite falls on silver's head, one of the moon stones
silver bought from flint flings out of his pocket, he then picks it up

Silver: OWWW!!!! stupid stalactite

Jaylen: i think we should run, before any more stalactites fall on our
heads

S and J: agreed...

- they run, not knowing where they are going they bump into another set
of stactites, then a wild machop appears, silver sends in caterpie,
which uses tackle, machop uses karate chop, it was a critical hit, then
caterpie started glowing it evolved into a metapod

Silver: ok stupid machop, metapod, use harden

- as it uses harden another stalactite falls, it hits metapod, but it
had no effect, then a paras appears

Jaylen: hitmonchan, come out and use mega punch on the paras

- the paras uses mega drain, it drained hitmonchan's health, hitmonchan
uses mega punch again, paras fainted, jaylen throws a pokeball, jaylen
caught a paras, then a stalactite falls and blocks the clear path out

Silver: ok now we're lost it's those stupid stalactites

Jordan: silver, where's your sense of adventure dude

Silver: well we better find another way out before we're screwed

Jaylen: i got an idea, i'll use hitmonchan...(silver interrupts)

Silver: to punch a hole in the wall, the cave will cave in on us

Jaylen: sorry...

- *RUMBLE*, *BOOM*, *RUMBLE*, a large rumble is heard........

S, J and Ja: what the hell was that

- meanwhile......

Author: now do you understand mr. voice-over, i hope i didn't lecture
you..

-Voice-over: (sarcastically) no you didn't

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who's that pokemon: the pokemon jaylen caught

I've read all of them. They're pretty good, but I want to suggest one thing. The scenes are jumping too quickly from one place to the next and it's rather hard to follow where they are. A little more detail in their traveling would help, but so far, a really interesting story so far... keep it up

thanks for your comments, the next chapter should come tonight or if not tomorrow

silverpidgeotto10 wrote:thanks for your comments, the next chapter should come tonight or if not tomorrow

Alright, I'm going to release 7-9 now