A Kanto Story

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Prologue: the night before

- the night before silver starts his journey

Silver's mom: silver honey it's 11oClock get to sleep

Silver: after this

TV announcer:(ON TV)the buizel wiggle, OUT NOW, -do the wiggle, do the buizel wiggle-

MOM: silver, you start your journey tomorrow and you're watching music programmes, turn your TV off and set your alarm

Silver: sorry mom

- he sets it for 6oClock

MOM: 6oClock!

Silver: well the early bird catches the worm, or in my case the pokemon

MOM: well turn the TV off, and get some sleep

Silver: yes mother

MOM: silver!

Silver: sorry

- the conversation wakes ellie who asks what's going on

Ellie:(half asleep)what time is it

MOM: 11oClock get back to sleep

Ellie: mom, silver had his TV on why have a go at me

MOM: because you should be asleep, now get back to sleep

Ellie: yes mom

- ellie goes back to bed

MOM: now silver, get to sleep

Silver: ok then

- turns TV off and goes to sleep

MOM: are you asleep,(looks at silver) i'll take that as a yes then

Silver: (yawns) goodnight

Ellie: oi silver goodnight

- he ignores her deliberately

Ellie: SILVER! GOODNIGHT!

MOM: ellie get back to SLEEP!

Ellie: ok then

- she gets back to sleep

Author: tomorrow Silver starts for his journey, what wil he pick find out next time on A Kanto Story, Chapter 1

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good storys i loved them

there are more to come so stay tuned - lol

Chapter 7: enter team legend

- who's that pokemon from last time: caterpie

- last time our heroes got themselves lost in viridian forest

- (viridian forest HGSS music plays)

Author: *yawns* ya know what, i'm getting bored of HGSS music, time for
a change

-Voice-over: enjoy .........

Author: ok what the hell are you doing her voice-over

-Voice-over: me?

Author: yea you! i don't see any other annoying voice-overs around here

Silver: excuse me can we get on with it

Author: sorry, enjoy

- (viridian forest FRLG music plays)

- BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!

S, J and A2: what was that?!

???: what an absolute success don't you think

????: i agree with you, now we can get what we want now

Silver: right jordan, ANON, wait what is your name

??: my name is rick, i'm a bug catcher

Silver: jordan, rick let's go

J and R: ok then

- they get moving seeing multiple pokemon including weedles and
metapods, eventually reaching an opening, is it the exit, well........

Jordan: oh come on why on earth are we not getting anywhere

Rick: i dunno really, it's really big you know

???: what on earth are you lot doing here

Silver: no the question is what on earth are you doing here

Jordan: no the question is were you behind the explosion

????: that is classified

Rick: who are you

- meanwhile........

-Voice-over: well time for a break

Author: last i checked there are no breaks here

-Voice-over: well i need one ok

Author: ok then, you can leave, while the action continues

Rick: who are you exactly

???: we are members of a............(???? interrupts)

????: what are you a blabbermouth, we are team legend

???: i'm a blabbermouth you are, no wonder we're grunts

Silver: ha you're only grunts the lowest form of people in an army

Jordan: he's right you scum

Team Legend grunt 1: SCUM!!!!, that's it time for battle, go sneasel

-Voice-over: finally some action yay

Silver: mankey get out there

MANKEY: mankey mankey (time for some hurt)

Silver: mankey use brick break

TL-grunt 2: all right time for murkrow to come out

Jordan: then so will pikachu

PIKACHU: pika pika (you're going down)

Jordan: pikachu use thunderbolt

TL-grunt 2: dodge and use night slash

- the dodge failed

-Voice-over: time for the edited highlights methinks

Author: please you're so lazy voice-over

- the fight ensues on both sides, with mankey using karate chop on
sneasel and pikachu using thundershock on murkrow, both enemy pokemon
dodge and sneasel uses ice punch and murkrow uses night slash, mankey
dodges and uses brick break, it was a critical hit and sneasel fainted then

Jordan: thunderbolt now

TL-grunt 2: dodge it

- the dodge failed, murkrow fainted

Rick: looks like you won then

TL-grunt 1: and i found some viridian wood for our boss

Silver: viridian wood?

Rick: it's special wood found here, not really rare though

TL-grunt 2: so what, honchkrow come out and use dark pulse on that
idiot

Rick: oh really (jumps out of the way)

- when rick jumped, the dark pulse hits a wild kakuna, and it fainted

TL-grunt 1: well we're done here, let's go

TL-grunt 2: ok then

- they leave, and when they did, the exit appeared before them

Silver: great, the exit

Jordan: thank god for that

GOD: no problem jordan

Rick: well, you found the exit, i'm gonna stick around and train a little more, see you guys

S and J: bye

- they leave, and a little while later pewter city was viewable from a
distance

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-who's that pokemon: the pokemon that honchkrow defeated

The voice over makes this funny.

i'm glad you like it - i put him in my story to get a laugh, and he mainly fights with the author - lol

stay tune for more chapters

You should make the voice over lock up the author and journey with silver and jordan.

lol - that would be funny - i may have a special based on that

that wud be cool

but i may have it at the end of the series

you should do a classic mix-up where he sets the clock to pm instead of am.
but then again nobody can tell you how you write the story not even yourself. the story is said to lead the writer

Otis The Peacemaker wrote:you should do a classic mix-up where he sets the clock to pm instead of am.
but then again nobody can tell you how you write the story not even yourself. the story is said to lead the writer

@otis: i write the story my way - i'm not gonna do the mix-up thing - that's stupid

youre right i got the idea from homestarrruner whitch is very stioubid

anyways i've started writing chapter 8 it should be up either tonight or tomorrow

chapter 8 is coming soon

Chapter 8: pewter city chaos

- who's that pokemon from last time: kakuna

- last time our heroes got themselves out of viridian forest

- (pewter city HGSS music plays)

Author: wait i thought i said no HGSS music

-Voice-over: really, i put the music on

Author: you DID WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!

-Voice-over: yea

Author: go away voice-over, enjoy the story folks

- the author and voice-over left

- (pewter city FRLG music plays)

Silver: finally pewter city, let's go jordan

ANON: i'm sorry, you're going to have to pay the toll

Silver: pay what!!!!!!!

ANON: i said PAY THE TOLL!!!!!!!

Jordan: why should we

ANON: pay the toll

Silver: ok, stop it now or else

ANON: pay the goddamn toll!!!!!

Jordan: never

ANON: pay the toll otherwise no entry

???: charmeleon flamethrower

ANON: aaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!

- our heroes try to get past but the ANON tells them...

ANON: hey!!!!! pay the toll now!!!!

Silver: ok ok

- they pay the toll, and enter pewter city

Jordan: finally

???: i know, my name is Jaylen, i owned the charmeleon

Silver: done no help though, but our pokemon need a rest in the pokemon
center

Jaylen: i wouldn't if i were........great they went

- they went to the pokemon center when......

ANON 2: pay the toll

Silver: not this again, say that one more time and my espeon will
introduce you to his shadow ball

Jordan: and that's the same with my ivysaur and his energy ball, now
let us through

ANON 2: no unless you pay the toll!!!

Silver: ok then, espeon shadow ball

Jordan: ivysaur use energy ball

- they both hit and our heroes including jaylen enter the pokemon
center, when............

ANON 3: quick the department store's being robbed

Silver: let's go guys

J and J: right

ANON 4: you aren't leaving unless you pay the...........(Silver, Jordan
and Jaylen interrupt)

S, J and J: oh SHUT UP!!

- they go to the department store but when they get there (no prizes
for guessing what's coming next)

ANON 5: pay the toll

Silver: (angrily) not this again, just let us through

ANON 5: no unless you pay the toll

Jordan: ok we'll pay the stupid toll

- they pay the toll, and enter only to find trouble

Jessie: who said trouble

Author: wrong episode

Jessie: sorry

- jessie and the author leaves

ANON 6: quick that tyranitar is causing trouble

???: ok tyranitar use hyper beam

Silver: hey! who are you and what are you doing here

???: i'm noone, and once i've done here, i'll destroy the pewter gym
and get rid of that crazy rock-seller

Brock: (in sinnoh) HEY!!!! don't talk to my father like that

Jordan: well we won't have that ivysaur energy ball

???: dodge

- the dodge failed, it was a critical hit

Jaylen: ok then hitmonchan, come out and use brick break

Silver: and makey come out and use brick break too

???: DODGE, NOW!!!

- the dodge succeeds

Silver: jordan, we'll hold him off get officer jenny and pay any tolls
they ask you to pay

Jordan: right

S and Ja: brick break

???: tyranitar, hyper beam

- the hyper beam misses, and the brick breaks hit, tyranitar

???: noooooooo

Officer Jenny: ok then you're under arrest

Silver: ok you have one more chance who are you

???: ok then, but only because you beat me, my names terob

Jenny: terob the theif you're under arrest

Terob: oh really (drops a smoke bomb, and disappears)

Silver: where'd he go

Jenny: we'll get him soon, well done for saving the department store

Silver: no problem, we better get to the pokemon center to heal up for
our gym battle

J and Ja: right

- afterwards our heroes went to the pokemon center, of course having to
pay the toll, and slept there overnight

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-who's that pokemon: the pokemon that was causing trouble in the
department store

That chapter is funny lol.

i'm glad you like it, "PAY THE TOLL" lol - chapter 9 should come this weekend

Chapter 9: a rock-hard battle

- who's that pokemon from last time: tyranitar

- last time our heroes reached pewter city and paid some tolls

- (pewter city HGSS music plays)

Author: hey! what did i say last time, NO MORE HGSS MUSIC!!

-Voice-over: *yawning*, who's complaining

Author: well well, the culprit emerges

-Voice-over: i'm the culprit?

Author: ha! you admit it, enjoy, but first

- (pewter city FRLG music plays)

Silver: *yawning* morning all, time to battle the gym leader

ANON: to do that you must pay the toll

Silver: not this again......

- as silver is about to leave jordan and jaylen arrive

Jordan: morning silver, i got you a coffee from starbucks

Silver: (sarcastically) did you have to pay the toll

Jordan: why no because......(Jaylen finishes)

Jaylen: because i told them that he was my cousin, so shall we go then

Silver: ok then

- they try to leave the pokemon center but...........

ANON 2: pay the toll, all of you

Jaylen: what the hell, you let us through last time

ANON 2: pay the toll, then you can leave

Jaylen: (*sighs*) ok we'll pay the toll

- they pay the toll and leave, they head for the gym but.........

-Voice-over: time for a commercial break......

Author: do you think, i'm gonna put in a commercial break, i don't think so. pay my toll for wasting time

- the voice-over pays the toll then, our heroes reach the gym.....

ANON 3: you must pay the toll before entering this gym

Silver: oh come on stop doing this

ANON 3: no toll no entry

Silver: ok then, we'll pay the toll

- they pay the toll but.......

???: want to buy a rock

Jordan: hey silver, isn't that the rock seller that theif was talking about

Silver: it is, can we enter the gym

???: yea, but you must buy a rock first

Jaylen: at least it isn't a toll

- they buy a rock and just before silver throws it, jordan tells him that it is a moon stone and he keeps it, the then enter the gym

Silver: i challenge your gym

????: welcome challenger i am forrest, brocks younger brother

???: i'll be the ref, i am flint

Silver: ok then let's battle

Flint: the battle between Silver the challenger and Forrest the gym leader will now begin. each side will use 3 pokemon, and the battle is over when all 3 pokemon on either side are unable to continue, in addition only the challenger may substitute pokemon

Forrest: i'll beat you using pokemon by brother raised, go crobat

CROBAT: cro cro (yay i'm out)

Jaylen: i thought this was a rock gym

Silver: espeon get out there

ESPEON: espe espeon (time for hurt)

Silver: use confusion, and keep using it

Forrest: use supersonic

- crobat's attack failed because he was floating up and down, it was super effective, then a beam of light came from the third eye of espeon, it learned psybeam

Silver: now use psybeam

Forrest: dodge

- the dodge failed, crobat fainted

Forrest: you got lucky, now go golem

GOLEM: goleeeemmmm (you're going down)

Silver: ok then espeon return, now bulbasaur get out there

BULBASAUR: bulbasauurr (time for action)

Silver: bulbasaur use razor leaf

Forrest: use sandstorm now!

- the sandstorm deflects the razor leaf and hurts bulbasaur

Forrest: use rock throw

Silver: dodge and use razor leaf

- the dodge failed, it was a critical hit

Silver: razor leaf again

Forrest: use rock throw

- the rock throw missed, the razor leaf hit, it was a critical hit, golem is low on HP, then bulbasaur bulb was glowing....

Silver: hmm.... i think that bulbasaur is using.......solarbeam bulbasaur

Forrest: dodge

- the dodge failed, golem fainted

Forrest: ok then, time for the pokemon i helped raise, i even evolved it for my bro, go steelix

STEELIX: steelixxx (you won't survive)

Silver: ok then, bulbasaur razor leaf

Forrest: iron tail now

- bulbasaur is low on HP

Silver: charge up solarbeam

Forrest: iron tail once more

- bulbasaur fainted

Silver: mankey get out there

MANKEY: man mankey (i'm out and ready to kill)

Silver: brick break

Forrest: iron tail

Silver: dodge that now

- the dodge succeeds, the brick break hit, it was a critical hit

Forrest: wow he's fast, you must've raised him well, but now i'll use dragonbreath

Silver: mankey hit the same point using brick break

Forrest: harden now

- mankey was too fast to let the dragonbreath hit, it hit the same spot as last time, it was another critical hit, steelix fainted

Forrest: wow, you're mankey is tough, here is the boulder badge

Flint: but you must either pay the toll or buy a rock to receive it

Silver: what!

Flint: only joking, forrest present him with the badge

Forrest: congratulations, here's your badge

Silver: i got the boulder badge

Flint: now buy another rock

Silver: (*sighs*)

- after he bought the rock which was another moon stone our heroes went to the pokemon center to stay overnight...

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-Who's that pokemon: the 3rd pokemon forrest used

Aren't those Pokemon a little too strong for the first Gym?

i could've used geodude, and the steelix as the onix

too late to change now.

yea, but for the next chapter, for the edited highlights of jordan's battle, geodude was used, not crobat

Chapter 10: the mountainous road

- who's that pokemon from last time: steelix

- last time silver earned the boulder badge

- (pewter city HGSS music plays)

Author: if this music continues playing then i'm gonna sue the voice-over, enjoy the story folks

- a day after silver's victory

Jordan: i got the boulder badge

- this is how he done it, against geodude, jordan used his ivysaur, it
went down quickly, against the golem, jordan kept ivysaur, and although
it put up a good fight, both pokemon fainted, and finally against
steelix, jordan used jaylen's charmeleon, and after some heavy blows
both pokemon fainted and jordan won because he still had 1 pokemon
remaining

Jaylen: well congrats now should we leave

Silver: wait what about your badge

Jaylen: i got the boulder badge quickly, a week after i started my
journey and that was a month ago, now should we leave

- they leave the city but unfortunately.........

ANON: to leave you must pay the toll

Silver: (angry) this is ridiculous

ANON: pay the toll otherwise you'll stay here

Jordan: we've had enough of this

ANON: why can't you just pay the toll without complaining

Silver: because you keep telling us too, *sighs* fine we'll pay the
toll

- they pay the toll, and they finally get out of pewter city

Silver: woop! we finally left pewter city, no more tolls

Jordan: yea, time to celebrate, where to next?

Jaylen: cerulean city, the gym leader there is misty

- they go forward then they find a couple of youngsters fighting over a
squirtle

Silver: hey look a squirtle

ANON 2: hey! this squirtle is mine

ANON 3: no that squirtle is mine

Silver: come on ladies, we all know that squirtle is gonna be mine

- the squirtle walks off and ends up in front of silver

ANONs 2 and 3: noooooooooooo we wanted that squirtle

- unfortunately the squirtle uses hydro pump on our heroes and sends
them back to..........

Jordan: nooooooooooo pewter citttttyyyy!!!!!

- then the squirtle goes into the bushes

ANONs 2 and 3: let's go....... before squirtle uses hydro pump on us...
run!!!

- they then leave the scene meanwhile

Silver: that's just great, i can't believe we ended up back here, why?

Jaylen: now we have to pay the stupid toll again

- they try to leave but......

ANON: you'll have to pay the toll again

Silver: we just left you saw us and now we have to pay again....

Jordan: stupid squirtle

- they pay the toll.. again, and go to route 3 again

Silver: right, now let's go to mt. moon, we should still.... oh crap

- just as they seemed safe, the squirtle emerges from the bushes

Jordan: if the squirtle is back then

Jaylen: why am i acting like i feel a sense of deja vu coming along

Silver: we'll see why now, ahhhh!!!

- the squirtle then unleashes another hydro pump, no prizes for
guessing where they end up..........

Student: errrr...... brazil?

Author: wrong!

Jordan: nooooooooooooo we're gonna land in pewter city again ahhhhh!!

Silver: great now we have to pay yet another toll, stupid squirtle

- they go to the exit then............

ANON: pay the toll, if you want to leave

Silver: oh come on! you've seen us leave twice now, we're getting sick
and tired of this

ANON: just pay the toll people and then you can leave

- they pay the toll and leave then when they think it's safe

Silver: oh great it's the squirtle again

- just as squirtle was about to launch another hydro pump

Jordan: pikachu come on out and use thunderbolt

PIKACHU: pikaaaaachuu (you will lose squirtle)

- it was super effective, squirtle fainted

S, J and Ja: go pokeball!!!!

- silver's pokeball hit's the squirtle and it is caught

Silver: yay

J and Ja: oh well, well done

- as they approach mt. moon.......

Jordan: finally mt. moon is on the horizon

Silver: thank god for that

GOD: no problem silver

Jaylen: hey wait isn't that a pokemon center

Silver: you know what it's getting late *yawning* i think we should

rest here, agreed

J and Ja: agreed

- they go to the pokemon center and stay there overnight

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- who's that pokemon: the pokemon that kept sending our heroes back to
pewter city

The Pokemon is Squirtle.

you'll see in the next chapter.....